Nyth-Pinank's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Greeksta's2ndTrance-]

much better....

The intro was lovely and the way you played the piano was awesome.
Great use of the claps, drums and snares.
The one thing that really bothered me was that one meldoy was repetitive threw out the whole song. Even though you did change the sounds, and synths that melody was always there. Like for example at 2:18 that melody stops and then like 10 seconds later its back. I am not saying that its a bad thing, but just keep in mind to change it up a bit.
Also you could have definately put more bass into it.
Overall this is really good for your second trance song. You definitely stepped it up a notch. :D I know your future releases are going to be great, keep up the great work.

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

Greeksta-69 responds:

YEEEEEEEE :D Thanks man yeah i was gonna add more bass i swear lol i just got excited and wanted to submit it lol anyways thanks alot man i appreciate the review !

[- Greeksta'sFirstTrance -]

wow...

For a first time trance attempt you are on the dot. =D I love your melody. I believe on your 5th second one of your notes is to loud, change the velocity on that. Your drums are also nice. Overall this loop is great, I would wished it was finished. Keep up the great work.

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

Greeksta-69 responds:

Hey thanks for everything man, i just made it short because im not that good at making it diverse yet and i just wanted to know if i should continue making trance because i love listening to it and just moving with the music know what i mean? so now im just trying it out and i think ill continue because people are starting to like it. Thanks once again i appreciate the review.

Greeksta

[{Hardcore Till I Die} RMX]

great...

I totally gotta agree with the others, when the piano kicked in, it was great. As I see this is your 1st song, this is definitely a awesome piece. I agree with navij11 that these are FL preset snares, but its okay it still sounded great. Keep up the great work.

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dj-skeetskeet-69 responds:

thanks! well it isn't my first song ever, i have about 8 months of experience under my belt =P which means i should actually be much better, but yeah whatever =P thanks for the review!

[Nightmares - 07]

good..

This is a very slow song and I definitely see why you named it nightmare :D I really don't listen to ambient but this is pretty relaxing. Keep up the great work.

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MaliousTrey responds:

again i cant help but say thanks ^^

[p4c-Sacrifice[unfinished]]

wow....

Wow this song seems very sad. Great for a movie or a clip. Great use of instruments on this, very nice. Nice drum and rim shot pattern. Keep up the good work.

Check out my stuff, I just released a song called ethereel, would you be so nice and review it.
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p4c responds:

hehe thanks! [OMGOMGOMGI JST FIGURED OUT HOW TO RESPOND TO REVIEWS NOW!!]

i will in a bit, cya for now ;)

[stalking the prey]

not bad...

Im not a real big fan of ambient, but since you needed some feedback, I thought let me help him out. :) You got a real nice pattern going on here, but it gets too repetitive. Try to change it around and add other effects and sounds.

Check out my stuff, I just released a song named ethereel, would you be so nice and review it.
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MaliousTrey responds:

i will say, the songs are intended to be listened to in the specific numbered order as the all merge into one another, but you are right, heh this one was more of an experimental mix and it was intended to switch paces from the previous to the next song, which ill add once i get it trimmed down to under the 4 meg limit XD

[A Proud Walk]

hey...

I see that this your 1st track, so your pretty new and this isn't bad for a new person. I mean it need a little work here and there, but overall not a bad start. Keep up the great work.

Check out my stuff, I just released a new song named ethereel, so would you be so nice and vote and review it please.

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Nick-kun responds:

Will do ;)

Anyways thanks for the review, I realized some of the shortcomings but it still sounded ok in my opinion so I took my chances. Expect my next track to be much better.

[Dreams-of-Tomorrow]

hey...

The intro is amazing. I love it, its nice and slow and just makes me just want to relax all day. :) The beat pattern is good, so overall you did a good job on it.

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DeathSpirit responds:

the song was simple... I realy didnt use any actual "instruments", just sequences in the database.
just wanted to try to increase my knowledge..... i tried 9 beta tests after i made my newest song... of course the beta songs did not turn out good... so i deleted them. i am currently working on a song... hopefully it goes well.

[TV - Paradise of Crise]

hey...

The intro, was interesting. Though it seems like you added random things together, but you are still new, so its okay. You are definately learning. I definitely hear a beach theme, so great job on that.

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Bomber109 responds:

Thanks. Will do.

[I Make Music #2]

not bad...

I see this is your 1st submission, so I am gonna go easy and help you out. The loop sounds great and I liked that you used bass in this loop, cause a lot of people don't. The clap seems to fit perfectly, so good job on that part. Next time try to put a small, original melody in there. I hope you are going to make this loop into a full song.

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hello-sup responds:

Nice. But there's another one in my profile that's a lot worse.