nice...
That melody is awesome.
I like how you built upon from the begging to the end, and nice change of drums.
I thought the drums at 1:45 were a bit loud, just a tad bit.
Overall this is a great song, but next time try to use a different melody or it will get repetitive, keep up the great work.
Check out my stuff, reviews would be nice.
~Nyth(Pinank)`