hmm...
The intro was quite interesting. That melody got quite repetitive and next to time use more effects and sounds and also more synths. Overall it was an okay song, but I think you could have done much better.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
well in my opinion the song isnt that reptetive. i'm just not that good with making melodies. but i can sytth, slice and arange them like hell
very soft...
This is a definitely soft techno. I am not sure how the original sounded so I can't judge the mix. It sounds okay, so good job.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
hey...
As your 1st song, this isn't crappy. lol It need more work added to it but it isnt bad. As a suggestion try to add more melodies and sounds to this becuase that one sound gets repetitive.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
hey..
The intro is pretty nice man. I think it was a guitar that was playing?, that was really nice man. The is definitely a wild wild west type, just like you said. The only thing that I thought you could have done much better is the ending. The gun shots just popped out randomly and didn't sound right as the ending. Overall this is a good song, keep up the great work.
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much better....
The intro was lovely and the way you played the piano was awesome.
Great use of the claps, drums and snares.
The one thing that really bothered me was that one meldoy was repetitive threw out the whole song. Even though you did change the sounds, and synths that melody was always there. Like for example at 2:18 that melody stops and then like 10 seconds later its back. I am not saying that its a bad thing, but just keep in mind to change it up a bit.
Also you could have definately put more bass into it.
Overall this is really good for your second trance song. You definitely stepped it up a notch. :D I know your future releases are going to be great, keep up the great work.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
YEEEEEEEE :D Thanks man yeah i was gonna add more bass i swear lol i just got excited and wanted to submit it lol anyways thanks alot man i appreciate the review !
wow...
For a first time trance attempt you are on the dot. =D I love your melody. I believe on your 5th second one of your notes is to loud, change the velocity on that. Your drums are also nice. Overall this loop is great, I would wished it was finished. Keep up the great work.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
Hey thanks for everything man, i just made it short because im not that good at making it diverse yet and i just wanted to know if i should continue making trance because i love listening to it and just moving with the music know what i mean? so now im just trying it out and i think ill continue because people are starting to like it. Thanks once again i appreciate the review.
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great...
I totally gotta agree with the others, when the piano kicked in, it was great. As I see this is your 1st song, this is definitely a awesome piece. I agree with navij11 that these are FL preset snares, but its okay it still sounded great. Keep up the great work.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
thanks! well it isn't my first song ever, i have about 8 months of experience under my belt =P which means i should actually be much better, but yeah whatever =P thanks for the review!
good..
This is a very slow song and I definitely see why you named it nightmare :D I really don't listen to ambient but this is pretty relaxing. Keep up the great work.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
again i cant help but say thanks ^^
very nice...
This is well put together, even without vocals =D The melodies are just amazing in sound. I definitely want to you to continue to make the final version of this. Great work my friend.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
wow....
Wow this song seems very sad. Great for a movie or a clip. Great use of instruments on this, very nice. Nice drum and rim shot pattern. Keep up the good work.
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~Nyth(Pinank)~
hehe thanks! [OMGOMGOMGI JST FIGURED OUT HOW TO RESPOND TO REVIEWS NOW!!]
i will in a bit, cya for now ;)
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