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hey...

I see that you are new to making songs. But this song isn't bad my friend. It is a great start. I see that you are improving more and more on every release. Thats the most important part. Now about the song, I definitely see it having potential to be a great song. I love the melody and chords. But next time use a EQ to lower the chords just a bit. Great job, keep up the great work.

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

not bad...

I see that you used given samples for the begining. But thats okay, its all good. The beat is really good and catchy. Great use of bass in this song. The only thing that I thought was annoying that it was real repetitive, so next time try to change it up a bit and use different melodies, and effects.

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

hey...

The intro, was interesting. Though it seems like you added random things together, but you are still new, so its okay. You are definately learning. I definitely hear a beach theme, so great job on that.

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

Bomber109 responds:

Thanks. Will do.

not bad...

I see this is your 1st submission, so I am gonna go easy and help you out. The loop sounds great and I liked that you used bass in this loop, cause a lot of people don't. The clap seems to fit perfectly, so good job on that part. Next time try to put a small, original melody in there. I hope you are going to make this loop into a full song.

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

hello-sup responds:

Nice. But there's another one in my profile that's a lot worse.

hmmm....

This is definately a very long loop. LOL Next time try to use the EQ to customize your output on the sound. Overall, I think this loops needs a little more sounds and effects, and some more drums. But a great start!!

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

awesome...

Great job on this track. I like the intro, its very slow and then it builds up with the effects and melody. The only thing that bugged me was, that the melody got repetitive, but who cares cause its techno. Keep up the great work. =)

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

hmmm...

Well this song has a beat. But then I just realized that the song ended. I see this song has potential. Just work on it a little more, and try to make it longer. Keep up the good work. =)

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

great....

The melody in the beginning was so nice and catchy ;D But then the track builds so it sounds even better then. Overall the song was great, but it kinda got repetitive, but that was the only thing. Keep up the good work. =)

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~Nyth(Pinank)~

awesome job...

Wow the beginning car door opening and zooming off was great. The vocals fit perfectly for this song. Also I see that you didn't make this song repetitive. It changed most of the time, so that was a good thing. Overall great job on this, keep up the good work =)

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(Nyth-Pinank)

awesome...

The beginning intro was quite interesting because it was nice and plain and then it kicks in, great job at that. I can't wait for the full version to come out. I love all your tracks. Great job and keep up the great work.

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(Nyth-Pinank)

dj-Nate responds:

Thanks man, I will.

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